Pretty Crazy

I'm speechless. That was amazing. Just amazing. It was beautifully written and flowed nicely. The meaning of the story is clear. Since it was from a child's point of view, ...

Hello, Just a couple nitpicks right quick and then the rest of the review. Bette looked at me and I shot her a week grin. I think you meant "weak". ...

Hello danceforevergirl, First of all, I love your user name! I'm going to review, my thoughts in blue . :) Prologue: I tried to stop her but it was too ...

Hello, I think pretty much everyone can relate to this. But then, not everybody writes it down. You did, and in poetry form too. The structure of it, I'd have ...

Hello, I shall review this for you. :) Okay, so this starts of really fast. The sentences seem smudged together. It was very boring, cows, trees, grass, and a mountain ...

Hello! But the grass was dry, and fire can travel fast. No duh. I feel like I'm being told here. Perhaps rephrase this to something along the lines of: "the ...

Hello, I read this before but must have forgotten to review this. xD So, there isn't any nitpicks (besides the ones Iceprincess got) that I can see. Alrighty then, let's ...

Hello, Seven years this sunny Sunday since you passed, From heaven your voice echoes, This, for me, is the best part. The choice of wording here is really nice. The ...

Hello, Back for another review! First up, the first section. I must say I'm fascinated by Bell's energy and quirkiness. And you did a good job of setting the mood ...

This is amazing! The way all the sections are structured and yet perfectly rhymed leaves me speechless. I’ll fight the demons that come back to haunt me. I’ll fight the ...

This seems a little random. But it's still a sweet poem. I bet you came up with it as you wrote, didn't you? If not, sorry if I offended you. ...

Wow! I can't think of anything else to say but that I really like this! Why? I couldn't tell you. I just did. Perhaps it was how strong voiced your ...

Hello, I'm going to try and review this in a way that's a bit new to me. Let's see if it works. My thoughts are in bold . Running down ...

*Gasp!* Oh no, so many grammar errors! I love this poem. It's fun to read and you did a really good job on it. That's all I can think of ...

Hi, Nice poem. Just spotted one little thing: 'Coz Even if I diligently try I think 'Coz should be 'Cause. Because it just makes more sense. ;) Oh and I'm ...